Tears And Rain

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Tears And Rain
A new high school freshmen named Rain makes friends with a outgoing party seeker. Rain confronts the thrills of high school and risks it all

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rain, high school
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Prakash

Nice story, But that climax really makes me to cry... Its really worth it...

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selinaseekins143

this really reminded me of my life. i got in a really bad car accident, and almost lost my life because of marijuana ! this actually made me cry. good job!

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priscillaakpaita

This is an excellent book for all high-school students and young adults.

Parents could benefit from reading this book with their younger children.

For me the book provided insight into the lives of a student.

Try to remember, follow what is in your heart and know what is right. One way or the other, someone is going to be the leader.

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priscillaakpaita

This is an excellent book for all high-school students and young adults.

Parents could benefit from reading this book with their younger children.

For me the book provided insight into the lives of a student.

Try to remember, follow what is in your heart and know what is right. One way or the other, someone is going to be the leader.

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guyjay7

A very sad story indeed. There were several typos that I noticed, so you may want to have someone else proofread your work before you publish.

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ladawn28

what a sad story but one that is so true

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youngwriter08

Hello Dearie,
In my opinion you lacked detail. If you had more details the book would be so much better. For instance,You could of explained Rain's feeling when he was drunk other than saying he felt funny. Oher than that it was a good book so keep writing.
Warmest Regards,
Abby

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