Wichtiger Beitrag
First, there are formatting errors after you downloaded the copy of the story to bookrix. The indents for paragraphs are double what they should be and at most places there is no space between sentences (do you want a space between sentences?).
The story so far is good. It has a very good beginning. Then it started to drag along a bit, but the end fixed that--I interested to find out what happened.
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