Truth Be Told

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Truth Be Told
Life was good for Rachel Thomas. Her long-term relationship with Miranda was the romantic fairytale all women desired.

One fateful evening she stumbles upon a secret - and nothing is ever the same. Shattered and broken, Rachel flees far into the night only to travel a long way back home.

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Lesbian, Romance, Love, Adult Situations
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Megumi34

love it, hope there's more.

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kelly

i like it! this cant be it tho! u should update, would ,love to finish it! it was good, one thing tho, u need to a little more clear an precise about time an place, its a lil confusing! but good work!

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foreverfemme

You have no idea how much I appreciate your time and comment. I do have a problem with choosing the right font. I'm looking into changing it and hopefully after that you'll be able to give my drivel a looksee. :-)

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bluedragon

I would like to give a critique but unfirtunately, I cannot make the font larger and for my eyesight, the font was too 'narrow' so sadly, I am not able. Good luck though, Evelyn/Bluedragon

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foreverfemme

Thanks so much for taking the time to read my story and for sharing your observations. I believe it's important to balance your creative voice with the established rules as well and will keep this in mind as I go forward.

Side note: I've tried (quite a few times now) to read your book but it never opens for me. If you have any suggestions I'd appreciate it 'cause I want to see what everyone else is raving about. :-)

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foreverfemme

I appreciate the honest critique and will proof it again for typos, etc. I've also added the rest of the sample, which really sets the tone for the ensuing angst, etc.

Thanks for reading, I really appreciate it.

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