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love it, hope there's more.

i like it! this cant be it tho! u should update, would ,love to finish it! it was good, one thing tho, u need to a little more clear an precise about time an place, its a lil confusing! but good work!

loving this sis, kept it up. Can't wait to see how this ends.

More please!!!!

You have no idea how much I appreciate your time and comment. I do have a problem with choosing the right font. I'm looking into changing it and hopefully after that you'll be able to give my drivel a looksee. :-)

I would like to give a critique but unfirtunately, I cannot make the font larger and for my eyesight, the font was too 'narrow' so sadly, I am not able. Good luck though, Evelyn/Bluedragon

Thanks so much for taking the time to read my story and for sharing your observations. I believe it's important to balance your creative voice with the established rules as well and will keep this in mind as I go forward.

Side note: I've tried (quite a few times now) to read your book but it never opens for me. If you have any suggestions I'd appreciate it 'cause I want to see what everyone else is raving about. :-)

I think you have a good story coming along. I know you've heard a few others say that there are some grammar mistakes so I won't drive that point home. However, I just came across this link in one of the groups, and thought you might like it. It talks about good fiction vs. grammar. It may help! And keep up the good work!

http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/bad-grammar-good-fiction.aspx

I appreciate the honest critique and will proof it again for typos, etc. I've also added the rest of the sample, which really sets the tone for the ensuing angst, etc.

Thanks for reading, I really appreciate it.