The Real World

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The Real World
The scars that I have will never let me forget my past. They stand, an ugly reminder of that perfect summer evening that went so horribly wrong. The night that I killed a perfect stranger and my boyfriend, all because of one stupid mistake.

Redemption doesn't seem like an option to young high school graduate Liana Williams. In fact, the only way out seems to be suicide after that evening. Though some may call it fate, and others may call it chance, the very special man she meets at a college that she doesn't care about may change her life. Felix is unlike any guy she's ever met; he's charming, high spirited, and jovial. As little as she wants to admit it, she's fallen for him. But one thing that she doesn't know is that he holds the second chance that will save her life. Yet one question still stands - what will it take to get past the scars and forgive herself?

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Gelöschter User

I really liked it! At one point I felt like it was going a bit fast with the progression but other than that I really enjoyed reading it. The beginning made me depressed but slowly as the book went on I was happy. The plot is really realistic which is why I feel the pain of this girl very strongly, I believe.

Great job! Keep it up! I hope my book will one day maybe be this believable! ^.^

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Ariana Suzanne

Oh, thank you so much. The tractor episode actually unfolded right on my neighbor's lawn. I don't think that the people in the car died, but the farmer on the tractor did. I realized that this was a great story, if I could bring her redemption and her falling in love again into... mehr anzeigen

Gelöschter User

It was great! You did a good job! ^.^

Ariana Suzanne

Thank you again.

Gelöschter User

No problem! ^.^

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Chris-Jean

In this gripping story, teenager Liana is distracted by her mobile phone and her boy friend and best friend fighting in the rear of the car. The outcome is devastating - two people have died, and two others are critically injured.

Following the incident, she takes full responsibility for the accident and ridden with guilt she sinks into deep depression.

I became totally immersed in this story and desperately wanted Liana to... mehr anzeigen

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Ariana Suzanne

Thank you for your positive words and the time that you took to review this. So writing-wise, do you have any comments or suggestions that would help to improve my piece? Ana

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