I really liked it! At one point I felt like it was going a bit fast with the progression but other than that I really enjoyed reading it. The beginning made me depressed but slowly as the book went on I was happy. The plot is really realistic which is why I feel the pain of this girl very strongly, I believe.
Great job! Keep it up! I hope my book will one day maybe be this believable! ^.^
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In this gripping story, teenager Liana is distracted by her mobile phone and her boy friend and best friend fighting in the rear of the car. The outcome is devastating - two people have died, and two others are critically injured.
Following the incident, she takes full responsibility for the accident and ridden with guilt she sinks into deep depression.
I became totally immersed in this story and desperately wanted Liana to... mehr anzeigen
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Thank you for your positive words and the time that you took to review this. So writing-wise, do you have any comments or suggestions that would help to improve my piece? Ana
Please leave your thoughts and suggestions below. Thank you!
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Oh, thank you so much. The tractor episode actually unfolded right on my neighbor's lawn. I don't think that the people in the car died, but the farmer on the tractor did. I realized that this was a great story, if I could bring her redemption and her falling in love again into... mehr anzeigen
Oh, thank you so much. The tractor episode actually unfolded right on my neighbor's lawn. I don't think that the people in the car died, but the farmer on the tractor did. I realized that this was a great story, if I could bring her redemption and her falling in love again into the mix. I hope that it was realistic and enjoyable to you.
It was great! You did a good job! ^.^
Thank you again.
No problem! ^.^