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This book is a collection of poems that I have written and am slowly adding to.

Love as deep as a bottomless chasm -
Beware of where you tread.
Love as dark as an underground cavern -
Some things are better left unsaid.
Beware of what you let them know,
Of what you let them hear.
For though it is said in innocence,
Someday they will make you fear.
If you tread near the edge,
You are certain to fall,
Your 'lover' will make sure of it.
For though you may laugh,
Their motive is sinister,
Your heart will be split in half.
For they are unafraid of what you ever may think,
And that, dear friend, is the most dangerous thing,
When, of Love's ledge, you stand on the brink.

Love's Dangerous Ledge

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poetry, reflections
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Nadwan Rosetta

Here we can find a mélange of elegant metaphors, rhetorical words, perfect flow intermingle with rare honesty. You are Emily Dickinson of this century, well done Ariana, I really love your poetry.

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Ariana Suzanne

Thank you so much.

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RevkenR

As I said before, your poetry is very good, I enjoyed reading the new poems. They are very deep in meaning and full of passion, which is what makes for a great powm.

Looking forward to more.

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Ariana Suzanne

Sorry to everyone who read recently... I just corrected some glitches that were messing up the poems and their titles. I hope that it didn't cause too much confusion.

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RevkenR

Very glad you are keeping me updated I love good poetry, and you are a very good poet.

Looking forward to your next update.

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RevkenR

Love the poetry, it is powerful and compelling. I also love reading things written by people with such a vast vocabulary. Your use of words is astounding.

You are a great poet. Only two things I was wondering about.

Did you mean desideratum in stead of desideratom; and in your last poem you mentioned a hooked cross, was that an elision to WWII, because in your opening you said the poem referenced WWI

Although the Swastika does... mehr anzeigen

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Ariana Suzanne

Oh, I need to fix that...
Even though I know perfectly well the difference between WWI and WWII, I messed that up. I'll fix that right away. Thank you for pointing that out. I will fix desideratom/desideratum.

On the other hand, thank you for the glowing review. It's so exciting... mehr anzeigen

RevkenR

I would love that. Thanks much, and keep up the good work. :o)

Ariana Suzanne

Okay, I will do my best. :)

RevkenR

Thank you!

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judycolella

Wow. That's some powerful stuff, especially the final poem about the concentration camp. It's also extremely well-written, true poetry. Almost anyone can come up with cute little verses that rhyme, or even manage to keep the meter, but this is flat-out masterful, and I thank you for sharing you immense talent with us.

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Ariana Suzanne

Oh, thank you so much. I really appreciate you taking the time to review this.

judycolella

Believe me, it was a pleasure! ')

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Ariana Suzanne

Please leave your comments, suggestions, and thoughts on these poems below. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

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Gelöschter User

I really like your poetic voice. You have this uncanny ability to write with a rhythm, though it is free verse. Very well done.

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Ariana Suzanne

Oh, thank you so much for your feedback.

Gelöschter User

No problem :)

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Ariana Suzanne

This is just a collection of poems I've been writing. I'll be slowly adding poems as time allows.

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lazarus67

They are all nice, but my two favourites are "Baby" and "Silence".

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