BookRix

I love this book! Very interesting, I hope you win the contest, but you were CRAZY for intering it!!

I like the way you wrote this story. It was a shot of excitment in this short story! Nice work.

I really enjoyed your book. I'm a big fan of interactive stories. Top shelf, keep up the good work.

This was funny! I smiled :) This reminded me of when my grandmother used to read me a story and let me chose what the character would do next. So as it reminded me of a cherished moment in my life, I enjoyed your story.

Unfortunately, there were some spots that were hard to make out perfectly. Especially near the choosing A or B. So make sure everything is easily read.

Also, I like how the lines are spaced out, but make sure it's consistent all the way through from beginning to end. The format shouldn't confuse the reader.

Otherwise, this was funny. You've got a great imagination and a bright future :)

Great job!
Keep writing!

---RbG

or B, the author is mad and I'm just as mad as her for reading it.

I love your humour, and your crazy approach to penning a piece of flash fiction and entering it in a contest.

And of course you're clever too, when you tell us not to open the book, knowing that we will open it out of sheer inquisitiveness.

I'm not sure you have a winning formula here, but you certainly made me pay attention, so good on you.

Good luck in the contest
Wendy

this made me laugh. ha! enjoyed it very much, Amy!