BookRix

I read these few pages and thought it would be interesting to see where this story would lead, However the type O's in these few pages are a indicator of poor spelling and understanding of the English language. The understanding of and proper use of the English language is important please make it important and use proper spelling.

This is a very good book but it needs a lot of editing done to it, due to the fact that there are a lot of spelling errors in it. But apart from the spelling errors it is very good and I would like to read more of the story :)