BookRix

Sorry for the super late responce. Thanks for the adise. But yes, It is a true story. Toke alot to write it. But, anywhom, Thanks I'll put great thought into it.

I'm torn on what to say - I understand the sudden nature of the ending - but there's a part of me that wishes (badly) that you'd change this from horror to a romance.
A tasteful one, but still.. there's plenty of drama to be had with a longer story. Unless this is a real story - in that case - it's tragic, but not something you'd want to change.
Great story.