BookRix

Very interesting.... please finish soon

I like it so far! I'm actually really disappointed that it's not finished.
One thing I'd like to point out is the cover. I can't really see any of the words on it unless I adjust my brightness and tilt my screen a certain way. So right now, it just looks like a strange, dark picture. So, if you'd like (you don't have to, obviously), I think it'd be better if you made the font of the title and the rest of the words a brighter color so people can see it.

Other than that, there was nothing too serious in the story that would need fixing, in my opinion. Just a typo here and there. But even then, those were scarce. (From what I saw)
It's really interesting and I'd love to know when you have more!