It was awesome, Hope to read more of the story, Nice dialogues it flows really well, keep it going :)
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Review - You had a good story going, moving nicely. Then it suddenly stops! I would be interested in seeing where this leads. Let me know when you have added to it. Good job. Robynn
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the flow is really easy to follow, as well as the dialog. looking forward to reading more!
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I really like how Orien is developing. Let me know when you write more!
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so far so good, you should continue with this.
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Yes! loving it please keep going I will be looking out for following chapters
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great start let me know when you put up more
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