Pixie Dust

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User: amaratsu
Pixie Dust
She had always believed in dreams, wishes, and pixie dust. Her life was void of it, to her disappointment.

****This is a rewrite. You can find the original at:http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-amaratsu-pixie-dust

Stichwörter: 
Fairies, Pixie Dust, Wishes, Schizophrenia
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shadowofthesky

This is overall one of my favourites, as

1) You have such a great style of writing, everything makes sense
2) The main characters life is alot like mine, (her mother yells at her for small reasons, her father is gone)
3) Your physical description of the girl is exactly like me in every way (yes, even the lack of chest)
4) I believe I have schizophrenia myself, I've been told I have little idiosyncracies like that of a person with... mehr anzeigen

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Anja.Uhren

...the first comment is so unnecessary...
Anyway, i can clearly tell that you improved but somehow i personally find it a bit sad, that you shortened the prolouge that much. There were some very lovely lines in the old version like the one that she loved running because it was the closest she could get to flying and all this. These really described her personality very well and a few more words wont do any harm i guess,... mehr anzeigen

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amaratsu

I see why you put this, but it is still in writing. I'm no where near done yet.

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