The Elvish Girl

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The Elvish Girl

As elfs are rounded up and thrown into slavery and murdered an elven girl named Tamuríl will rise up and change the world, she will save us or she will forsaken us, she is our salvation.


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L. Avery Brown

1. Rewrite your blurb - a blurb is not meant to be a scene out of the book. It's a brief summation of the story.

And I do realize this is just the beginning of your book - so with each new chapter think of it as an episode of your favorite TV show - what would the preview be? Think of how that voice-over actor would try to entice you to watch the next episode...

"Tamuril Nenharma has seen bloodshed before. She knows firsthand... mehr anzeigen

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Gelöschter User

Vary interesting story, though I would have all the elves butchered by the end of this. But that's me, I'm just a bloodthursty guy! :D

~Rebekah~

Good reason

Gelöschter User

my elves are desert dwellers, and little is actually known about them. The orcs in my stories vary, some a great adventurers, some are bandits, some are farmers. But they all have a great deal of respect for anyone who will lift a weapon or body part against them. They have a code of honor.

~Rebekah~

Sounds interesting

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