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Good book

Thanks and that was just a mistake. I had trouble putting my book online.

i really liked it but i didn`t get why u put on one page "gg"

I'm glad you like it, umm I'm thinking of just adding all the chapters once I'm completely finished, so it might be a while...Ill make sure to post it as soon as I'm done

gr8 story,look forward to the next,got me intreged good use of words to

i really enjoyed that story,whens the next one out? gr8 choice of words

Thanks =), & i will fix it. I've always had a grammar problem lol

You have got the start of a very good story! I really liked it. There are some spelling and sentence errors that can be caught by a read through. Good job!./joeparente

It is my 1st language , & i will be sure to do that but...what exactly was a failure?