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I can relate to this story...waited in line for 45 minutes at Disney for a hair raising roller coaster ride just to bolt down an emergency exit when I finally made it up to load! lol I could feel the guy's tension. Good job.

Thank you so very much for your vote.

Loved the style and presentation, very vibrant with your words. I really like the cover as well.
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Yes,you do have a way of painting with your words, great job. I voted.

Thank you. i'm glad you enjoyed my story. I just finished reading your book "confessions of a non-believer" and I found that it spoke to me and some of my own experiences growing up.

Thank you for the thumbs up. I have read some of your work and you are an excellent story teller and writter.

You really have a strong grasp of using words to create wolds. Everything was so vivid that I felt I was there, next to John.
Great piece!!

Great, inventive ways of painting the picture keeps the story flowing eeriely! Thumbs up from me!