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tanza.1

Thank you so much for this story. I read all the time and I write some as well. This is beautiful. I so appreciate your ability to create meloncholy scenes with the use of such beautiful wording. I could not stop reading. Honestly, I want to read about the next chapter in Mona and Caroline's lives.

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michelle.kanoho

Wow, this book is the very first I've read on this site and it captivated me with how real it was. The situations, emotions and concepts are things even I have walked through.
Not every story has a happy ending, but this one was so much like what really goes on in life. In life you never really get all the answers, and the ending left me thinking. Great job on this book!

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sjhanson

This is not only the best story I've read so far on this site, it is among the best I've ever read. And I read a lot.
Good luck to you, not just in this contest, but to your career. You will go far.

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lovingempath

You've already got a fan base, and you can add me to it.
I started bawling about half-way through your story. I'm not sure if it was because of the things to come - or the things that were - or the totally unique realness in which you've executed your beautiful story (Pure beauty can make me cry too). I expected a great story from all of the rave reviews, and you certainly lived up to (even surpassed) my expectations.
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etelizabeth

Hi Alison, I enjoyed your story very much. You've done an ace job of painting a family's nuances and frailties that lie just beneath the surface. I found only a few minor typos that stopped me for only a moment. For instance, on BR page 8 the two words onto should be on to. And on BR page 13, the italic paragraph seemed to need an extra word or two for clarity. A job well done. Wa do, Elizabeth, you have my vote.

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gooduklady

I enjoyed your story, it was easy to read and very real. Just a question, though. Who is Julie?

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rebekahjennings

Hi Allison,

Firstly, I wanted to say I like your title. It is creative and draws me to your story.

I like the way you write. You tone is light and connects me well with your protagonist. I could so easily capture the feelings of the sister too. I have a twin sister and we always shared rooms. It makes me laugh about the splitting of the rooms in two. We tried it once with chalk line. Only problem was, she had the window and I... mehr anzeigen

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scottkelly

Extraordinary story. Wish I'd read this one first, I'd rescind my votes for the other Family Stories entries. You've got some writing chops, ma'am.

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dholm1

For one so young in literal years, you have an awesome talent and wisdom for sensing what makes people tick. At your age I was still too involved with myself to look out at others and try to figure out why people do the things they do. I'm much older now, wiser, and this is why I can relate so well to this story. We all carry our secrets, some of them will go to the grave, as they are meant to.

I have nothing but praise for... mehr anzeigen

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tuesdaymorning

Thank you so much for the encouragement and for taking time to catch those grammatical glitches. It's funny to think of how many times I've skimmed over this piece and was still able to miss the simplest of errors. Again, thank you for your input. I deeply appreciate it :)

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paulashene

Absolutely wonderful...your descriptions were perfect to bring your characters to life..certainly a keeper and a vote...Paula

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