To Smile While Crying

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To Smile While Crying
After being abused his whole life, young Liam distrusts the world and those within it. But after meeting Jake, a middle-aged man, his perception of people and life completely changes. But then a horrible accident happens that tears Liam’s life apart.

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rebekahjennings

Hi Allanah,

I read your story. I think you are on the right path and there's definitley some talent here.

Some parts of the story had me questioning it's realism. This could be due to my work history (social work/Youth work) or it could be my culture so take from it what you will.

In Australia, it would be very unusual for a 16yo to be adopted, especially when we're talking about the state stepping in to remove. I'm not sure... mehr anzeigen

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themightyduck

Thanks very much for your comment, Rebekah. It's really helpful. I didn't really decide a location where the action takes place so if it was more possible in America for this to happen, I might change it to specify that.
Also, with him calling the man dad, I have watched several... mehr anzeigen

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mirandabm

yes, I'm sure it's alright to enter it for both. It's a bit late to gather up the votes but it's a beautiful little story and I'll vote for it!

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themightyduck

Thanks Miranda. I was thinking about entering it in the Family Stories competition but I'm not sure if I'm allowed to because I entered it into the Travel Stories one. Do you know if I can?
Thanks again. I'm really happy that you liked it. :D

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mirandabm

What a beautiful story Allanah and so well crafted. I was very relieved that it had a happy ending! You should enter it for the Family Stories competition.

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marygibson

I loved this story. So many children go through abuse every day of their lives. They should all read this and believe there are good people in the world. This story would give them hope.

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themightyduck

Thanks very much. I am extremely honoured that you feel that way. It means a lot to me. :-)

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