BookRix

Excellent imagery. Needs a longer narration. Much too short, but the descriptions are beautiful. If you can write these images, you have the talent to make the story line much better. Take care.

Kevin Noa

I like your fast paced stories and like Joe would have liked to see this a longer story but I enjoyed it and have saved and gave you a vote...Paula

I enjoyed your story, well done.

REally enjoyed the read! I recommend to others to read this!

She captures something in this, love her writing!

I like the way you bring the reader straight into the scene. You paint pictures beautifully in your descriptions and you write very well. Look forward to reading more of your work.

A sad story . very well done . It could have been a little longer however. A little more time is needed to get into your characters. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work./joeparente
I have a family story that you might like : "THE RECIPE" Let me know what you think./joeparente/ PS: You have my vote for this one also.

Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".

The Librarian