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Thanks Stevie, I will try and build on the storyline. Any critique is highly welcome.

Wow! I love how you write just enough to seriously catch interest, but leave most of it to the imagination. Especially liking the Animal analogies. I feel like there's more to this story than just these few pages. Awesome. :)

Thanks Shexy, appreciate the read and the add even more so.

AWESOME!!!!

This is actually new for me. I am not used to penning such short literature. Your words are encouraging.

I like the title it match with the writing