I found one too.... :3 :D
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This book is really cute :)
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hehehe..thanks a lot <3
A delightful story, Alice. I hope you continue to develop it.
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thanks so much. i will try continuing it. hope so :)
done!! sooo...next update ?? @_<
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Hahaha don't tell him that I gave him that name. ... he already suck with previous one that I gave him.. :D
Omg... Too late. Well guess I'll have to handle the consequences :-D
Haha no worries! What Mr. Pumbaa could do ? *thinking about it* OMG :o xD
Its such a cute young love story!!!
I love it!
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hehehe....thanks a lot! >______<
Cute story you have here :) looking forward to read more
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thanks so much!!! <3
i will update soon today... ^_^
I'm really looking forward to it :D It's such a cute story. I needed to get used to the fact that they are named after food, but it's a really funny idea :)
But I have to say, as cute as it is right now, I'm a little afraid it will turn pretty dark at some point :S But still,... mehr anzeigen
hehehe...well, that is yet to see. but i prefer to keep it innonnce as much as i could. :)
That's nice to hear :3
It´s a realy sweet idea :) great story und nice cover :)
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hi, thanks x2 for the feedback :D
yea, the credits of the cover is not mine but i'll pass it on :)
Omg, this is like the cutest story I've ever read!! XD
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hehehe...thanks for appreciating it :)
any feedbacks or suggestion are welcome if u have any XD
Hi,very artistic and cute cover , like the poem/ synopsis(blurb), good idea of two supporting each other when the parents are so busy; this is a believable scenario. Gets a little confusing when they reach school. you bring in some tension when they lose each other/ mistake for another. This tension is a good idea just needs a little work to make it clearer what is happening and the feelings more explicit. Then the resolution... mehr anzeigen
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no no, it didn't end yet. it is still chapter one -their childhood.
anyway, i wanna say thank you so much for the thoughtful feedback. i was undecided a little bit when they arrived at school so thats why its confusing there :) i will try improving more. thanks reading it ^_^
over all good book kind of hard to understand at times....good job
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if your into that...... im not presuring you
well, i will see it before judging it :)
okay thx
yup, u totally nailed it. frewaking cute even though to this day i still cannot drink a milk without feeling a little under the weather... XD
I MISS U ALL TOO!!!! but u will have to wait for this year to end before i got all the time in the world again to hang around bookrix all day long...uhhh missing that day so much <3
OM! thats too far! :o