look sorry but i am only 12 years old I am just learing about this stuff
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There are a lot of solvable problems in this story. First of all when you have people talking you need to put quotation marks around their dialogue, and every time someone new starts talking you need to begin a new paragraph.
This is a really interesting concept that could be branched into something completely awesome. But before you do that you have to stop putting in random facts about the main character and her house. What... mehr anzeigen
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