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This was told very well! I actually laughed a bit, because you told the parent's story so well (in their strange way), and could not help but sympathize with Athena. But to think this is actually true - that she's a witch, and you've layed down a whole new world before her to roam freely! This is a story you could hone and make your own.

I think you should write more, but you I think you should reedit it because you have a few extra words. But otherwise IT WAS AWESOME!!!