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Stichwörter: 
sun, night, light, morning, mourning, poetry, poem
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angamonkey

Short, simple and amazingly lovely. The cover design just added to the poem so much more :) Post up more poetry soon.
-Angely

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lazarus67

They say that a picture is worth a thousand words...yet you few words paints a grand picture.

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RebeckDawn

I think that even though it's so short, the imagery is beautiful. You should add more verses using this same idea with "morning" and "mourning".

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gracefulwings

Renee,

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like the poem, as well as the cover. With the poem only being twenty syllables but still being metaphor-heavy, I was a little worried. I remember a poet friend reminding me the purpose of the elusive little haiku, though: not the syllables, but the connections, double-entendres, and "Ah-ha!" spoken in a breath. Perhaps this is just a long haiku, then. :)

Well, it's a nice thought, anyways.

Thank you again!

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UniquePoet60

Alexandra,

I love the book cover. This is a beautiful poem with feelings. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Excellent writing!

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