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It's interesting what you chose to write about. Little flashes of your life.

Tiny peeks of light like lightning in the storm. If you had wings you'd be a lightning bug.

On those lines, the last poem was the best of this flash of light style. You told a lot without being too graphic or too occult about why you were writing it. Just enough details to flash what your relationship.

That's the hallmark of a poet whose been writing a while.
Good whittling of the little flashes of light you captured, but i'd like you to name the storm.