A well-crafted story. The language is rich, and seduces the reader in much the same way the main character is seduced.
The ending is an exquisite tease, leaving the reader full of desire and wanting to know more. Excellent job!
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Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Travel Stories".
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Thanks so much, it made my day