B ︀е ︀s ︀t ︀❤️ ︀P ︀о ︀r ︀n ︀★ ︀S ︀t ︀а ︀r ︀s, ︀open ︀link ︀↪ http://︀x︀n︀-︀-︀-︀-︀d︀t︀b︀b︀f︀d︀c︀w︀p︀d︀3︀a︀5︀d︀2︀c︀6︀a︀.︀x︀n︀-︀-︀p︀1︀a︀i︀#︀u︀s︀e︀r︀_ebook-alada-porter-four-letters-or-less
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
Very beautiful and hauntingly sad. I almost hopped that Mia would say yes, but I guess it wasn't meant to be. You have a talent for portraying emotions, post up more work soon!
-Angely
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
A clever take on the four-letter contest, and a mature take on romance. The prose feels completely unforced despite the difficult constraint. Great work!
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
That was brilliant. How you managed to write four complete letters that actually had enough four letter words in each of them to make sense and be moving and emotional, is beyond me. You did an amazing job with this, and I am thoroughly impressed.
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
If you read this book plese do not forget your girl griend
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
Where do I begin?! I don't think I can even comment, man was that deep! To the best of my ability I'll say this; I guess this is one of those exceptions where Tom didn't deserve Mia, not that I'm sticking up for her, because he wasn't willing to work on opening his sensitive side enough to show that he actually loved her. But what on earth happened?!
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
I loved the pun, four letters, and how you created a full story, while still leaving space for imagination and guessing.
You should check out my poem for the contest too. Just if you want to!
BTW you'll probably win.
-me ;)
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
Another wonderful, job well done, Beautifully sad tragic too in the four word challege another winner. YOu have a talent my friend.
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
Not only was the story beautifully told, you doubled up on the meaning of the contest by doing in four actual letters as well as writing words of only four letter or less. Wow! Amazing, and as you say, very - and tragically - romantic!
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
B ︀е ︀s ︀t ︀❤️ ︀P ︀о ︀r ︀n ︀★ ︀S ︀t ︀а ︀r ︀s, ︀open ︀link ︀↪ http://︀x︀n︀-︀-︀-︀-︀d︀t︀b︀b︀f︀d︀c︀w︀p︀d︀3︀a︀5︀d︀2︀c︀6︀a︀.︀x︀n︀-︀-︀p︀1︀a︀i︀#︀u︀s︀e︀r︀mokomonko_1334904876.7555611134