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write more about lisa imprinting

I loved this book I hope u will write more

plz plz plz plz plz write more!

Hey,
Yea so your book it nice, the concept is really good and i am a twilight fan so it is driving me crazy to know whats gonna happen next. But couple of things i know i am not a professional and you may not like the way i say my advice, but i also like to write whether short stories, poems and i have some novels working on. You have great potential, you need to work on your expression more, the way you write your story almost sound as if you are mocking the whole twilight saga,the whole idea. Secondly it would be good to develop the events that take place in the story more and also the characters, take the twilight fans into a world where we don't know that the cullen's had something else going on. Add charisma, something extra to the characters of the cullens family. hey ad humor if you can =). Your book seems rushed and jumbled up, too many things are happening in one day,make the cullens seem more mysterious and interested in the girl. Add descrption to the environment, the mood, the clothes of the characters, Get the read more intrigue with what you are sharing. If this is something you really what to do the, to go professional get the practice in...

plz write more

Plz finish this book it's so good plz just finish this I love reading and this book is so awesome and I love his so plz Cindy and keep me updated

Plz finish this book it's so good plz just finish this I love reading and this book is so awesome and I love his so plz finish and keep me updated

This book has a great start.All you like is to finish it i read alot of books and this one is drawing me in so when you finish it let me know

you should really write more it good

ADD MORE PLEASE I NEED MORE YOU CAN'T END A STORY LIKE THAT SO PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!