BookRix

Uhm the spelling mistakes are a little distracting but otherwise a good introduction to the story. You said you hace some difficulty with figuring out where to go next: do you have an idea of the general plot line you want to use or are you making up what happens as you go along? (Some authors find it more interesting that the characters they create are so real that they dictate the story line more than they, the author, does).

I liked it so far:) just watch out for your spelling but other than that, I enjoyed the story so far:)

I love the era, one because Im pagan, I will write you some notes on it and send it to you as a message it has alot of potential :)