I was so worried that things wouldn't work out for the Mountain Man...I can't wait to see what comes next :D
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Very sophisticated writing and an interesting plot line... your words are so attention-grabbing and vivid, taking possesion of the reader and throwing them headfirst into the scene. I felt like I was there! Haha I am an avid admirer of good description because it is really the "spice" of the story, you know? Adds that special touch that really enhances the plot as a whole. A joy to read. I look forward to reading the new... mehr anzeigen
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I believe your work enlightens the reader, re. the earths natural beauty. The colorful descriptions takes the reader on a journey of learning & fulfillment.
I love both the freshness & imagery, of this story.
I truly hope, you will not delay too long in updating this story.
Chris
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sook so long for me to actually say anythin about your book, my heads been all over the place.
i found your book interestin, i've never read any wester non-fiction type boos, it is non-fiction, right????
it wouldn't be the type of book that interests me, but you seem to have a talent for writin, your esspecially good at detail....
anyways, i'd like to keep up with this story, let me kknow when you update!!!
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Your story is enticing and edgy. Cant wait to read more!
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I have a new appreciation for mountain men. This isn't my typical type of reading, but I’m glad to read it. It’s good to try new things sometimes.
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An amazing story! You truly have a way with words. Your descriptions, I felt like I was actually in the woods, safe the cold weather. I do hope you write more soon.
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It was really descriptive so I could picture what was happening in the book. I especially loved the introduction...it was a great way to start off this book. And I really liked how you told it in the mountain mans perspective so we could picture the journey he was facing. Over all I really enjoyed the book and I hope you continue it. :)
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I really like the story. I can see that you are very passionate about this era. Needless to say you have a flawless writing style.
I personally like constructive criticism so here are areas of improvement:
The introduction. It is very informative and beautifully written but too slow pace. Maybe you know when u start a book but can't get over the first few pages. Now here is how I would do it better: I loved the other chapters... mehr anzeigen
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you really know what you write.
i like it... actually, i quite envious. :) good job
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