Wichtiger Beitrag
Wichtiger Beitrag
I love good poetry, and I loved this. Only one comment, I think the title might not draw in readers. You might want to consider changing it.
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Abhay Gangadhar Peshave
thanks, will consider that.
judycolella
The last poem is absolutely beautiful. The first two have a lot of spelling and formatting errors you should fix before publishing it. Otherwise, this has great promise.
Ken is right though - that title has to go. It sounds like false humility, even if it isn't, and doesn't... mehr anzeigen
Abhay Gangadhar Peshave
thanx
thanx
can u help me in promoting my book, plz?