Stories About the Rain

Von:
Stories About the Rain
I remember her best as a brightness: a splash of amber against the rain, wet and blurred, her hair pulled up in the imagined style of a dead people. It always rains on Papho, drip-mists and drobbles taking turns like gentle rocking waves, a pulse that becomes a way of life, rising in crescendo to the terror of the summer monsoons. They say that the new natives have a hundred different words for rain, but the truth is simply that they have many ways of expressing what they feel.

Beiträge und Kommentare
Wichtiger Beitrag
Sakshiii

This is so beautiful. And vivid. And poetic. And fresh.

I love rain and your story is a gem!

3 Kommentare
Dieser Kommentar wurde gelöscht.
Dieser Kommentar wurde gelöscht.
Wichtiger Beitrag
Gelöschter User

Aaron, both the story, and the quality of your writing, are superb. I venture to say that Ev and Aaron were one and the same person during the writing, so captivating are the images of the planet that you write about. Superb!

Wichtiger Beitrag
Gelöschter User

This is incredible. The story is poignant and meaningful... and your writing! So poetic and descriptive! This is a gem!

Wichtiger Beitrag
UniquePoet60

Aaron,

This is exceptional writing from a very talented writer. The descriptions and illustrations you pen on the page are so vivid and clear.

I recently wrote a poem titled "Rain" and was looking to read something else that pertained to rain.

Thank you so much for sharing.

Wichtiger Beitrag
Gelöschter User

You are a talented writer

Wichtiger Beitrag
Rgabel

Review - This was a story framed in poetry. You have a gift for making description vivid and an inextricable part of the story. Your writing 'voice' is fresh and unlike most. Excellent job. Robynn

Wichtiger Beitrag
hwkollias

This is amazing stuff. The author takes you right in to his story and allows you to experience it with him. I look forward to more- keep writing Aaron!

Wichtiger Beitrag
angamonkey

This story was amazing! I couldn't stop turning the pages! :D you did a great job on this and I hope you put up more books soon.

Wichtiger Beitrag
gooduklady

I am right behind Judy. Your story is beautifully written and deserving of a resounding win. You have my vote, with pleasure. Valerie

Wichtiger Beitrag
judycolella

Looks like the voting thread just opened - I'm delighted to say I was the first to cast a vote for your entry - good luck!

Weitere Beiträge anzeigen
Um eine optimale Funktionsweise zu gewährleisten, verwendet unsere Website Cookies. Durch die Nutzung der Website stimmst Du der Verwendung von Cookies zu. Mehr Infos
OK
Top of page
Kein Miniaturbild Entfernen Bitte wähle einen Grund aus Bitte gib die Stelle im Buch an. de de_DE