BookRix

this is such a good book soon you'll turn as famous as susan collins

i added more to it if u wanted to read it again

one suggestion? details are important. saying "somehow the shack exploded" sounds odd. there must have been a reason. so you should think of something (little sister left the stove on, started a fire, etc) something, anything... and then go with it! that way it all pieces together.

keep writing and adding to this!