i jus luv itt...i cn undrstnd the girl's pain it ws a shrt nd cute luv stry although it has gramatical mistakes but it doesn't mattr as lng as the stry ws superb :)
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theres one thing i dont get why is her name andrew
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your story is so good is u going to write some more like it nice story :-)
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your writing is really undeveloped and kinda juvenile
there is something behind your story but u dont develop it at all.
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its andy in the 2nd page