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Metri1993

Angel of Darkness, now called angel of destruction is in process...read what i have and tell me what you think. Many of yu have read the original so im sorry i changed a lot of the sory...perhaps yu liked the original better please tell me so if that is the case.

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Metri1993

New book for everyone to read it's a fantasy and if your good at drawing anime characters please tell me

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it's_me_dont hate=)

EAD ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic. He wasn't supposed to sleep there. He was supposed to sleep in the living room they went to the attic
. They saw Jerry's corpse and they just left... mehr anzeigen

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vincearkuslove

Hello,

Just finished reading Angel of Darkness. I loved the storyline, and want to offer some constructive criticism. You definitely need an editor. Spelling, punctuation, vocabulary, run- on sentences, etc. All of these need to be fixed before publication, if you want to make your stories truly successful. Also, there are many open ends left between chapters that leave readers confused and jumbled. On a few occasions I caught... mehr anzeigen

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Metri1993

let me think of it I cant let just anyone be my co writer I have to know you and that you wouldn't try to make my book your own

vincearkuslove

Understandable. Add me on facebook. Im an open book. https://www.facebook.com/vincelovin

Metri1993

I redid angel of darkness please read

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