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Angel of Darkness, now called angel of destruction is in process...read what i have and tell me what you think. Many of yu have read the original so im sorry i changed a lot of the sory...perhaps yu liked the original better please tell me so if that is the case.

Hiiiiiiiii i am sry it was a prank for fun sryyyyy

Also I'm also coming out with a new Angel of Darkness

Please read A Lustful Heat

New book for everyone to read it's a fantasy and if your good at drawing anime characters please tell me

i like your books!

EAD ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic. He wasn't supposed to sleep there. He was supposed to sleep in the living room they went to the attic
. They saw Jerry's corpse and they just left because they were scared. But that night they all died because of their friend. He killed them for making him sleep in that house if you don't send this to 11 comments you will die tonight by Jerry. Example 1: A man named Stewart read this and didn't believe it. He shut off his computer and went through his day. That night while he was in bed he heard something outside of his door. He got up to look. And now he's dead. Example 2: a girl named Haley read this in the morning and she got scared but she didn't send it. She wanted to now if it was true. She went to school (She was only 13 years old) and that night she died. If you don't post this on 11 comments Jerry will 'visit' you his isn't fake. Apperently if you copy and past this to ten comments in the next ten minuets you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. You will either get kissed or asked out, if you brake this chain you will see a little dead girl in your room tonight. In the next 53 minuets someone will say I love you or I'm sorry

Hi,
Nice writing and I enjoyed.Wish you all the best!

Hello,

Just finished reading Angel of Darkness. I loved the storyline, and want to offer some constructive criticism. You definitely need an editor. Spelling, punctuation, vocabulary, run- on sentences, etc. All of these need to be fixed before publication, if you want to make your stories truly successful. Also, there are many open ends left between chapters that leave readers confused and jumbled. On a few occasions I caught myself trying to find where I was in the story, thinking I'd jumped pages, but I hadn't. Again, I loved the story. It had me captivated, and it has a ton of potential. It just needs improvement. I am, personally willing to assist on this, and possibly be a co-writer at no charge. I feel so much more can be expanded on this, and would love to add to the story. Please get back to me at your earliest convenience. Thank you!