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I would be glad if you could read my very short Story "It lurks"
Its only 1 1/4 pages and its pretty funny!
Be ready! You may like it! =)

http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-miss-riddle-it-lurks

Work on the development of your prose and be a little bit heavier with description. In your story (the beginning) I wondered what the narrator's apartment looked like. What made it pathetic? What makes his simple meal "simple"? What is he cooking? Details like that can really enhance your prose.

A warm welcome from the BookRix Team :-)