BookRix

Just wanted to say that I love your story, The Kings Heart, and can't wait til you write more. I also hope you don't mind a tip or two, so here goes. At the end of your last paragraph, you need to separate the dialouge; otherwise, people can't really understand who's saying what. Hope you continue writing.
Best Wishes,
vampirefairies01

just read the hidden world its very good cant wait till theres more!! thanks for the read and look for my friend request!! thanks erica

Hello! I'm from Germany and I can't speak englisch very well. I like wolves too! Welcome to the Bookrix community! You will have a lot of fun :D

Welcome to the BookRix community - have fun!