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Ptrckhnghn

hey it's pj! I really like it so far hope you write more. I published two books ( 1.he hit me and it felt like a kiss 2. ultraviolence) and would mean a lot if you check them out thanks!

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H, J, Macey.

Your book? Is it a pome or are you trying to imitate Shakespeare? You need to attend to spacing and research your subject. What is a 'fortyard' As an old seaman I have heard of forepeak and a foredeck, there is a yardarm but that is on the mast. I'm sorry if this is not what you want to hear, but you did ask.

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the one who writes

thank you for your feedback ill change the problems. A fortyard was how some vikings reffered to decks on massive ships called drakes, due to their large scale

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thank you for yoir feedback

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