Thank you Gooduklady I appreciate your reading my story and realize you are much more talented than I.I think in all my excitement my grammatical errors were made in my rush to finish and submit the story.
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Thank you so Paula much glad you enjoyed my story. I love getting the star!
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your descriptions are great and loved the ending or beginning as it may be.
I concur with all who wrote you notes before mine...Paula
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There are several words that I would change to make the work flow better....and some punctuation fixes. I have sent them to you privately.
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Your FIRST story...OMG...wow, as my two good friends...Patty and Paige said "You ARE a writer".
Need to read more...because I too am a romantic at heart.
Laszlo
Ps I gave you 4 on 'concept' only because it isn't finished(in my opinion)
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I like to have the reader imagine what comes next. I did have help so this isn't just me I would not have attempted this on my own.I have ideas just need to get into story form. Thanks again for reading it. Serena :-)
Paige thank you for taking time from your busy schedule and for the encouraging words.
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This was hard for me thank you P. for all your time and help
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