Its The End

The End of The World Von:
Its The End
It was October 5, 1999..

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end of the world, horror, death
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Honolulu, HI

Never mind Sessions becoming an ersatz-sympathetic figure, which is disgusting
enough to contemplate. What about Trump himself? In one of the last things I
read before Trump's election shocked the world, a pundit described his
campaign as being on hospice care, merely focused on making the candidate as
comfortable as possible before the inevitable end. With Hope on her way out,
and Jarvanka soon (?) to follow, it feels... mehr anzeigen

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xenawp3

i have voted for this book because i think it is very interesting. please return the favour and vote for mine too. there were a few small issues like spelling but it was good, well done

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xenawp3

i have voted for this book because i think it is very interesting. please return the favour and vote for mine too. there were a few small issues like spelling but it was good, well done

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xenawp3

i have voted for this book because i think it is very interesting. please return the favour and vote for mine too. there were a few small issues like spelling but it was good, well done

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manjitpreetam

The end was quite irrevocable, I couldn't help feeling sorry for the poor family.
I am sure I wasn't that good at your age.
Good luck in the contest!

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felixthecat

Yes, I enjoyed reading this short piece very much.
If I might suggest (humbly), do a quick spell check, which would benefit this promising piece. Consider capitalizing proper pronouns? Just a few minor things like that to improve your narrative flow:)
Good job:)

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