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I enjoyed reading this. I felt the Sri Lankan countryside shining through in your description of the little boy getting into mischief by the river. I think this is the best bit of the story. You go on to relate all the important events in his life, which is interesting, but I think that to really bring the story to life you could show us more of your father's personality. Maybe tell us about his hopes, thoughts, feelings as... mehr anzeigen
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