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Lovely descriptive world and delightful inner life for your girl. Good strong beginning that held my attention.
was not ready for it to end.
Lions
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Very real and imaginative...would like to read more about this person...reminds me of myself...then and now.
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I've been there but with different roles played...loved it!...save and left vote...Paula
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Shelly owns the life of so many young girls. She sees her days as markedly bland as all the days before; but she has one valuable gift...an imagination...the tool of dreamers the world over! Wa do, Elizabeth
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Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".
The Librarian
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great story my fav so far!
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Thanks! It is sort of autobiographical... ;)
Shelly Pace is mostly how I was at 15, including the home life. It was a one shot short story I wrote ages ago when at college.