Wonderful description and very nice parallel between the souls and the birds...lovely to read...Mari
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very well written and your descriptions are excellent./joeparente
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The imagery came alive with your words. This is going in my faves :)
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Thank you very much indeed. The tutor I was with at the timne of writing set the subject, ' it was a morning full of crows' an d Black Morning came out olf it. But thanks for having it as a fave.
Bluedragon
took you along that bleak path, into the nave and that dreadful conclusion...You did it again! Very nice, Evelyn!
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I am so glad you liked it. One always tries and never knows if it will be liked. i have had nothing but praise for the story
Bluedragon