I read your short story and it was pretty interesting. Great job. :)
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Thank you! I think I want to add a little more in characterization, to give it a little more flavor... then I think it will be very good.
I read your book. It's great, kept me moving till I read the last page. You should have added more.
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Not that fluent, I keep practising anyhow. I love reading. As soon as I found this website I thought I should write too. Now that is all I want to do :) And people who speak english in Pakistan are the ones who love english.
There are but not so many Americans in Pakistan.
Well you keep it up and soon you will be a fluent English speaker! So glad to have this little chat and welcome to Bookrix! I look forward to reading some of your work and feel free to stop by my profile page anytime... there will always be something new to read because I love... mehr anzeigen
Inshallah(By the will of God) I will be a fluent speaker. And I am happy too to have a little chat :) I'll soon complete my book and I'll be happy if you'll give it a your time. And yes, I'll read your other books too :) you too take care :)
Thank you! I tried to be a little creative! :)
yes, it is creative and it suits your story :)