BookRix

Hello Michelle, thanks for you comment. This story was a bit hard for me to post, but I hope it will invoke thought.

Masterful description of the puppeteer - sadly so true . . .

Thank you for your comment, well said.

The puppet has a master,that's true, but the people don't when they keep their eyes and ears open to seeing and hearing the truth when its presented.
Your story is nicely written.

Hey Laz
It's always good to hear from you. Thanks for the kind comment and heart.

Hi Renee
So glad you liked this new story and thanks for the heart!

Thank you for your positive comment and the heart, so glad you liked it.

Thank you for your kind comment and for catching my typo, which I have fixed. The heart is much appreciated.

I'll start with a typo. You wrote "Love they neighbor" and I think you got an extra in e thy.

With that out of the way, your writing is good and flows and your story is meant for every government of the world. I agree with what you wrote.

Very creative. I loved it. The way it flowed, the mood, everything about it is amazing. Great job.