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Angel, sweetheart, when you put the words "be my hero" or be my "savior" in a poem; you're calling all perps in any given area. Change that.
On the content side, you are a natural songwriter. Natural.
Concise. Open hearted poetry that has strong emotion. And above all, the compulsion to write, which means--you'll be good at it if you keep it up.
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These poems were lovely. I loved them <3 :)
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Thanks
Love the honesty. I'm late, i know but i have grown as a writer. Thank you.