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It needs a little editing but I thought it was a good story.
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Quite a chipper story. Very cute the way he day dreamed! One often needs an escape from reality even if it is daydreaming :)
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I only read the first two pages, and have to tell you PLEASE change "wonder" to "wander." I will come back later to read the rest.
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